Sunday, April 11, 2010

Toxic Environment

MY definition for toxic environment is a bad environment, we live in a environment that is being destroyed by many things like fast food, kinds of transportation, and littering. my first example of a toxic environment is fast food i fell that fast food is very harm full because it makes adults and children obese and sick which mean you wont be able to contribute to are society by getting a job so you wont be able to pay taxes so the government can hell fix it and until we are able ti fix are environment it will get worse and worse. my second example is transportation but not all of them are bad the kind my talking is about the type that pollutes the environment like cars, bus's and etc... makes the air we breath very dirty and makes the ozone worse. my tree example which will be littering i think littering makes are environment toxic because when you liter it goes straight to the ocean and it make the animals that help the environment to get better sick and they will dead so it will also rewind the food chain. in conclusion i fell that fast food, some sorts of transportation, and littering help make a toxic environment.

3 comments:

  1. this is good, but its not conviencing because you use words like a feel.. try and avoid such words.

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  2. that is true, transportation can pollute the air, but how does it affect you?

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  3. i agree with bianka
    but its good :)

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